Folks… WOW. I asked for help and you came through, thank you!
I closed the comments from the original post because feedback is coming in and I need to digest it all and take time to rework the book. This will be the third draft… and then I’ll send it out for another round of review. Anyone who leaves a comment on THIS post will get an email with that draft, hopefully in the next few weeks.
I’ll share some feedback that I’ve gotten as soon as I get permission from the people who have given feedback.
THANK YOU!
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Jason,
Per my e-mail, I would be happy to review your next draft! Again, great concept for a book.
Heather
Thank you Heather, you are on the list 🙂 🙂
Jason:
When you’re ready, I can help with the next review of your book. Good luck on this new endeavor.
thanks Don – just so everyone knows – when you leave a comment you get on the list, even if you don’t hear a confirmation from me 🙂
Happy to Jason!
Darrell
Hey Jason,
Put me on the list to review the 3rd draft.
I’m game again Jason
Karin H
I’d love to help.
Hyrum
Jason,
I loved your presentation last evening @ NSA Mountainwest. It was clear, concise and engaging. It reminded me of one of my favorite philosopies. Less is more. I would love to read your work so far on eight lunches. I mentioned your project to Russell Lookadoo as well.
My experience as an entepenuer has taught me many things “Not To DO” when you own your own business. I am certain this new project will be a smashing success for you!
I would be pleased to review it. I have reviewed and edited books.
Jason – having been a book editor and now Job Seekers Network director it will be a pleasure to see your draft. J. Hollingsworth
Hi, Jason.
I am back in town now. Should you still need my assistance, I’m ready to help.
Myriam-Rose
Hey Jason – We discussed this on the LinkedIn Bloggers group. Would be happy to review your book.
Happy to help review and provide feedback.
Hi Jason, I am very happy and willing to review the draft here in the UK. Good luck with it.
Jason,
Absolutely. More than happy to be of assistance 🙂
Melissa
Sure, as i always have clients looking into this option!
Loved reviewing the second draft, bring on the next draft.
I’d be happy to review your book.
Steve and I are huge fans of yours. We would be honored to review anything you are writing.
I would love to review the updated version of Eight Lunches.
Hi Jason,
Ok, this time I just know you’ll send me the draft. I look forward to reviewing it!
Thanks,
Lyne
Hi Jason,
I would love to review the book. Look forward to the draft.
-Muthu
Jason – Enjoyed reading your second draft and would look forward to receiving the third. I’m also curious to see if you incorporate any of my suggestions!
Happy writing – “Evangelist Ellie”
Hello Jason. I received your message and yes, I would like to receive an updated draft. I understand office moving all too well: two times in six years. Which was actually like four moves.
Take care
-Brian
Would love the opportunity to help you out and review your draft!
Hey Jason, just want to be sure I get in on the next draft! Thanks
Jason,
I’d be more than happy to review the book – sounds like a great concept!
Great webinar the other day, BTW. I think it will do well for us both!
Best,
Kevin
Hi Jason,
I’d be quite interested in reviewing your next draft. As a writer, what type of feedback will you be looking for?
Denny Stockdale
Hi Jason:
I am always happy to help you! Just let me know what your needs are! Cheers! Continue to enjoy working on this next book! Best regards, Elizabeth Craig
Jason, interested in your Eight Lunches concept book. Sounds like you are combining entrepreneurship and networking.
Would you like an educator’s viewpoint for reviewing your third draft?
Best, Dr. Jay
Twitter: @RealMenReadJay
Hi, Jason!
Loving my use, so far, of JibberJobber. I would love to give feedback on your next edition of your book. (If it helps, I am an excellent proofreader, and an author as well.)
Thanks for the info that you have shared previously!
Warm regards,
VelDean Fincher
Marketing & Communications
and
http://www.TheLaymansGuidetoDivorce.com
I’m in!
Frank
Hi Jason!
I’m so glad to hear about the second draft of “Eight Lunches” and would be happy to review it.
Happy weekend!
Shahrzad
Please count me in…
Please count me in…
I would be pleased to review your new book. I have experience in this area as a former editor for McGraw Hill and an author of many publications myself.
I’d be honored as I have been privileged to enjoy your materials already!
If you still would like feedback, I’d love to take a look at the draft.
As a career coach who has heard you speak, I’m delighted that you are now addressing the deeper social and psychological issues that plague job seekers and entrepreneurs in this turbulent economy. I’ll be happy to review your next draft.
Hey Jason, please add me to the list. I want to see the next draft. Thanks, Robyn
Thank you for coming out to Charlotte and speaking to so many people who truly appreciate your warmth, engagement, and humor in a difficult period of time.
Hi Jason, I’d be happy to read your draft and provide feedback. Thanks, Carolyn.
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I would be happy to review your next draft! Again, excellent idea.
I would be more than happy to review and give you feedback,Jason!
Thanks!
Cool, I’ll review, if you want, Jason!
Hi Jason,
I am honored to be involved in another round of review! I also plan to provide an endorsement. Can’t wait! Cheers! Enjoy! You are getting closer and closer to your goal! Best regards, Elizabeth Craig
As always, be glad to help with your new book.
Regards, NHR