Eight Lunches Update

Folks… WOW.  I asked for help and you came through, thank you!

I closed the comments from the original post because feedback is coming in and I need to digest it all and take time to rework the book.  This will be the third draft… and then I’ll send it out for another round of review.  Anyone who leaves a comment on THIS post will get an email with that draft, hopefully in the next few weeks.

I’ll share some feedback that I’ve gotten as soon as I get permission from the people who have given feedback.

THANK YOU!

 

59 Responses to “Eight Lunches Update”

  1. Jason Alba (al – buh)» Blog Archive » Eight Lunches Excerpt & Request for Feedback Says:

    […] versions of THIS draft, but will send out versions of THE NEXT draft… just leave a comment on this other post and I’ll shoot it to you when I’m ready.  THANK YOU so much for helping me get this […]

  2. Heather R. Huhman Says:

    Jason,

    Per my e-mail, I would be happy to review your next draft! Again, great concept for a book.

    Heather

  3. Jason Says:

    Thank you Heather, you are on the list :) :)

  4. Don Orlando Says:

    Jason:

    When you’re ready, I can help with the next review of your book. Good luck on this new endeavor.

  5. Jason Says:

    thanks Don – just so everyone knows – when you leave a comment you get on the list, even if you don’t hear a confirmation from me :)

  6. Darrell Says:

    Happy to Jason!

    Darrell

  7. Haneef N. Nelson Says:

    Hey Jason,

    Put me on the list to review the 3rd draft.

  8. Karin H Says:

    I’m game again Jason

    Karin H

  9. Hyrum Says:

    I’d love to help.

    Hyrum

  10. Mitch Seehusen Says:

    Jason,

    I loved your presentation last evening @ NSA Mountainwest. It was clear, concise and engaging. It reminded me of one of my favorite philosopies. Less is more. I would love to read your work so far on eight lunches. I mentioned your project to Russell Lookadoo as well.

    My experience as an entepenuer has taught me many things “Not To DO” when you own your own business. I am certain this new project will be a smashing success for you!

  11. Robin Schlinger Says:

    I would be pleased to review it. I have reviewed and edited books.

  12. J. Hollingsworth Says:

    Jason – having been a book editor and now Job Seekers Network director it will be a pleasure to see your draft. J. Hollingsworth

  13. Myriam-Rose Kohn Says:

    Hi, Jason.

    I am back in town now. Should you still need my assistance, I’m ready to help.

    Myriam-Rose

  14. George Krueger Says:

    Hey Jason – We discussed this on the LinkedIn Bloggers group. Would be happy to review your book.

  15. Patrick Says:

    Happy to help review and provide feedback.

  16. Simon Rickard Says:

    Hi Jason, I am very happy and willing to review the draft here in the UK. Good luck with it.

  17. Melissa Cooley Says:

    Jason,

    Absolutely. More than happy to be of assistance :)

    Melissa

  18. Gail Liebhaber Says:

    Sure, as i always have clients looking into this option!

  19. Michael Ianni Says:

    Loved reviewing the second draft, bring on the next draft.

  20. DG Says:

    I’d be happy to review your book.

  21. Kris Hoots Says:

    Steve and I are huge fans of yours. We would be honored to review anything you are writing.

  22. Bengt Wendel Says:

    I would love to review the updated version of Eight Lunches.

  23. Lyne Tumlinson Says:

    Hi Jason,
    Ok, this time I just know you’ll send me the draft. I look forward to reviewing it!

    Thanks,
    Lyne

  24. Muthu Says:

    Hi Jason,

    I would love to review the book. Look forward to the draft.

    -Muthu

  25. Ellie Says:

    Jason – Enjoyed reading your second draft and would look forward to receiving the third. I’m also curious to see if you incorporate any of my suggestions!

    Happy writing – “Evangelist Ellie”

  26. Brian Miller Says:

    Hello Jason. I received your message and yes, I would like to receive an updated draft. I understand office moving all too well: two times in six years. Which was actually like four moves.

    Take care
    -Brian

  27. Kim Says:

    Would love the opportunity to help you out and review your draft!

  28. Lyne Tumlinson Says:

    Hey Jason, just want to be sure I get in on the next draft! Thanks

  29. Kevin Kermes Says:

    Jason,

    I’d be more than happy to review the book – sounds like a great concept!

    Great webinar the other day, BTW. I think it will do well for us both!

    Best,

    Kevin

  30. Denny Stockdale Says:

    Hi Jason,

    I’d be quite interested in reviewing your next draft. As a writer, what type of feedback will you be looking for?

    Denny Stockdale

  31. Elizabeth Craig Says:

    Hi Jason:
    I am always happy to help you! Just let me know what your needs are! Cheers! Continue to enjoy working on this next book! Best regards, Elizabeth Craig

  32. G. Jay Christensen Says:

    Jason, interested in your Eight Lunches concept book. Sounds like you are combining entrepreneurship and networking.

    Would you like an educator’s viewpoint for reviewing your third draft?

    Best, Dr. Jay
    Twitter: @RealMenReadJay

  33. VelDean Fincher Says:

    Hi, Jason!

    Loving my use, so far, of JibberJobber. I would love to give feedback on your next edition of your book. (If it helps, I am an excellent proofreader, and an author as well.)

    Thanks for the info that you have shared previously!

    Warm regards,

    VelDean Fincher
    Marketing & Communications
    and
    http://www.TheLaymansGuidetoDivorce.com

  34. Frank Scarpelli Says:

    I’m in!

    Frank

  35. Shahrzad Arasteh Says:

    Hi Jason!

    I’m so glad to hear about the second draft of “Eight Lunches” and would be happy to review it.

    Happy weekend!

    Shahrzad

  36. Tom Kenny Says:

    Please count me in…

  37. Ty Norwood Says:

    Please count me in…

  38. Joel Dubow Says:

    I would be pleased to review your new book. I have experience in this area as a former editor for McGraw Hill and an author of many publications myself.

  39. Renee Alfieri Says:

    I’d be honored as I have been privileged to enjoy your materials already!

  40. Kent Says:

    If you still would like feedback, I’d love to take a look at the draft.

  41. Dan Rink Says:

    As a career coach who has heard you speak, I’m delighted that you are now addressing the deeper social and psychological issues that plague job seekers and entrepreneurs in this turbulent economy. I’ll be happy to review your next draft.

  42. Robyn Feldberg Says:

    Hey Jason, please add me to the list. I want to see the next draft. Thanks, Robyn

  43. Candice Szeliga Says:

    Thank you for coming out to Charlotte and speaking to so many people who truly appreciate your warmth, engagement, and humor in a difficult period of time.

  44. Carolyn Finn Says:

    Hi Jason, I’d be happy to read your draft and provide feedback. Thanks, Carolyn.

  45. Jason Alba (al – buh)» Blog Archive » Eight Lunches, Second Draft, Instructions Says:

    […] I think that’s it… pretty simple… again, if you want to see it, please leave a comment on this other post. […]

  46. Barry Doctor Says:

    I would be happy to review your next draft! Again, excellent idea.

  47. Brad Merrill Says:

    I would be more than happy to review and give you feedback,Jason!

    Thanks!

  48. Rob Merrill Says:

    Cool, I’ll review, if you want, Jason!

  49. Elizabeth Craig Says:

    Hi Jason,
    I am honored to be involved in another round of review! I also plan to provide an endorsement. Can’t wait! Cheers! Enjoy! You are getting closer and closer to your goal! Best regards, Elizabeth Craig

  50. Norman Reiss Says:

    As always, be glad to help with your new book.

    Regards, NHR

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