Folks… WOW. I asked for help and you came through, thank you!
I closed the comments from the original post because feedback is coming in and I need to digest it all and take time to rework the book. This will be the third draft… and then I’ll send it out for another round of review. Anyone who leaves a comment on THIS post will get an email with that draft, hopefully in the next few weeks.
I’ll share some feedback that I’ve gotten as soon as I get permission from the people who have given feedback.
THANK YOU!
May 19th, 2010 at 2:48 pm
[...] versions of THIS draft, but will send out versions of THE NEXT draft… just leave a comment on this other post and I’ll shoot it to you when I’m ready. THANK YOU so much for helping me get this [...]
May 19th, 2010 at 2:54 pm
Jason,
Per my e-mail, I would be happy to review your next draft! Again, great concept for a book.
Heather
May 19th, 2010 at 3:04 pm
Thank you Heather, you are on the list
May 19th, 2010 at 3:21 pm
Jason:
When you’re ready, I can help with the next review of your book. Good luck on this new endeavor.
May 19th, 2010 at 3:23 pm
thanks Don – just so everyone knows – when you leave a comment you get on the list, even if you don’t hear a confirmation from me
May 19th, 2010 at 4:14 pm
Happy to Jason!
Darrell
May 20th, 2010 at 6:46 am
Hey Jason,
Put me on the list to review the 3rd draft.
May 20th, 2010 at 8:33 am
I’m game again Jason
Karin H
May 20th, 2010 at 9:18 am
I’d love to help.
Hyrum
May 20th, 2010 at 10:20 am
Jason,
I loved your presentation last evening @ NSA Mountainwest. It was clear, concise and engaging. It reminded me of one of my favorite philosopies. Less is more. I would love to read your work so far on eight lunches. I mentioned your project to Russell Lookadoo as well.
My experience as an entepenuer has taught me many things “Not To DO” when you own your own business. I am certain this new project will be a smashing success for you!
May 20th, 2010 at 1:01 pm
I would be pleased to review it. I have reviewed and edited books.
May 21st, 2010 at 8:25 am
Jason – having been a book editor and now Job Seekers Network director it will be a pleasure to see your draft. J. Hollingsworth
May 21st, 2010 at 12:36 pm
Hi, Jason.
I am back in town now. Should you still need my assistance, I’m ready to help.
Myriam-Rose
May 23rd, 2010 at 11:22 am
Hey Jason – We discussed this on the LinkedIn Bloggers group. Would be happy to review your book.
May 24th, 2010 at 10:57 pm
Happy to help review and provide feedback.
May 25th, 2010 at 1:01 am
Hi Jason, I am very happy and willing to review the draft here in the UK. Good luck with it.
May 25th, 2010 at 9:06 pm
Jason,
Absolutely. More than happy to be of assistance
Melissa
May 28th, 2010 at 11:10 am
Sure, as i always have clients looking into this option!
June 2nd, 2010 at 5:49 pm
Loved reviewing the second draft, bring on the next draft.
June 8th, 2010 at 8:01 am
I’d be happy to review your book.
June 8th, 2010 at 10:10 am
Steve and I are huge fans of yours. We would be honored to review anything you are writing.
June 9th, 2010 at 9:45 am
I would love to review the updated version of Eight Lunches.
June 9th, 2010 at 2:45 pm
Hi Jason,
Ok, this time I just know you’ll send me the draft. I look forward to reviewing it!
Thanks,
Lyne
June 9th, 2010 at 11:32 pm
Hi Jason,
I would love to review the book. Look forward to the draft.
-Muthu
June 10th, 2010 at 7:14 am
Jason – Enjoyed reading your second draft and would look forward to receiving the third. I’m also curious to see if you incorporate any of my suggestions!
Happy writing – “Evangelist Ellie”
June 11th, 2010 at 4:08 am
Hello Jason. I received your message and yes, I would like to receive an updated draft. I understand office moving all too well: two times in six years. Which was actually like four moves.
Take care
-Brian
July 6th, 2010 at 12:03 pm
Would love the opportunity to help you out and review your draft!
July 31st, 2010 at 10:41 am
Hey Jason, just want to be sure I get in on the next draft! Thanks
August 5th, 2010 at 11:42 am
Jason,
I’d be more than happy to review the book – sounds like a great concept!
Great webinar the other day, BTW. I think it will do well for us both!
Best,
Kevin
August 11th, 2010 at 3:53 pm
Hi Jason,
I’d be quite interested in reviewing your next draft. As a writer, what type of feedback will you be looking for?
Denny Stockdale
August 12th, 2010 at 4:03 pm
Hi Jason:
I am always happy to help you! Just let me know what your needs are! Cheers! Continue to enjoy working on this next book! Best regards, Elizabeth Craig
August 24th, 2010 at 12:01 pm
Jason, interested in your Eight Lunches concept book. Sounds like you are combining entrepreneurship and networking.
Would you like an educator’s viewpoint for reviewing your third draft?
Best, Dr. Jay
Twitter: @RealMenReadJay
September 13th, 2010 at 10:19 am
Hi, Jason!
Loving my use, so far, of JibberJobber. I would love to give feedback on your next edition of your book. (If it helps, I am an excellent proofreader, and an author as well.)
Thanks for the info that you have shared previously!
Warm regards,
VelDean Fincher
Marketing & Communications
and
http://www.TheLaymansGuidetoDivorce.com
September 18th, 2010 at 8:34 am
I’m in!
Frank
September 18th, 2010 at 8:43 am
Hi Jason!
I’m so glad to hear about the second draft of “Eight Lunches” and would be happy to review it.
Happy weekend!
Shahrzad
September 18th, 2010 at 3:38 pm
Please count me in…
October 19th, 2010 at 1:35 pm
Please count me in…
October 20th, 2010 at 6:31 am
I would be pleased to review your new book. I have experience in this area as a former editor for McGraw Hill and an author of many publications myself.
October 23rd, 2010 at 1:07 am
I’d be honored as I have been privileged to enjoy your materials already!
October 28th, 2010 at 12:55 pm
If you still would like feedback, I’d love to take a look at the draft.
December 17th, 2010 at 11:29 am
As a career coach who has heard you speak, I’m delighted that you are now addressing the deeper social and psychological issues that plague job seekers and entrepreneurs in this turbulent economy. I’ll be happy to review your next draft.
December 30th, 2010 at 12:23 pm
Hey Jason, please add me to the list. I want to see the next draft. Thanks, Robyn
May 28th, 2011 at 5:53 am
Thank you for coming out to Charlotte and speaking to so many people who truly appreciate your warmth, engagement, and humor in a difficult period of time.
June 10th, 2011 at 1:48 pm
Hi Jason, I’d be happy to read your draft and provide feedback. Thanks, Carolyn.
July 13th, 2011 at 1:09 pm
[...] I think that’s it… pretty simple… again, if you want to see it, please leave a comment on this other post. [...]
July 13th, 2011 at 1:49 pm
I would be happy to review your next draft! Again, excellent idea.
July 13th, 2011 at 2:58 pm
I would be more than happy to review and give you feedback,Jason!
Thanks!
July 13th, 2011 at 3:26 pm
Cool, I’ll review, if you want, Jason!
July 13th, 2011 at 7:46 pm
Hi Jason,
I am honored to be involved in another round of review! I also plan to provide an endorsement. Can’t wait! Cheers! Enjoy! You are getting closer and closer to your goal! Best regards, Elizabeth Craig
July 14th, 2011 at 5:40 am
As always, be glad to help with your new book.
Regards, NHR
July 14th, 2011 at 7:30 am
Hi Jason,
I’d be very happy to help…Valerie
July 14th, 2011 at 11:16 am
Happy to review and provide feedback.
July 14th, 2011 at 3:54 pm
Look forward to critiquing.
July 16th, 2011 at 6:51 am
Hi Jason, if you’re still looking for reviewers, I’d love to read through your second draft. I missed the first draft, so I’ll bring a fresh perspective.
July 18th, 2011 at 1:01 pm
Hi, Jason!
I just finished reading and making a few notes on Eight Lunches. I’ve enjoyed the read, and will be putting several of the points to work in my business right away.
I AM sending you a Word doc back with just a few comments through Track Changes, because they needed specific reference points in the doc.
This is the type of exchange that I would have (and HAVE had) with a mastermind partner or group, so it is realistic to me.
I’d love to add an endorsement to your finished book, and I’ll send that with the suggestions I am sending on today.
August 1st, 2011 at 4:51 pm
Hi Jason. Just got your email. Would love to help. Feel free to email the latest/next draft to me when you’re ready for some more feedback.
August 2nd, 2011 at 1:57 am
Hi Jason! Send me your 2nd draft if you want some feedback. Thanks!